Haiku 43 (Morning After Storm) Comments

Green grass, Jasmine fragrance, natures gifts.

This is really a beautiful poem on nature through olive grass and Jasmine flower. Wonderful expression.

Wet grass under the feet and the scent of jasmine in the air are exactly what we have here in my home with the onset of monsoon! Beautiful Haiku, Savita!

It beautifully depicts the scene after a storm, lovely haiku.