Haiku 40 - Air Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 40 - Air

Rating: 5.0


Air makes breeze that cools
Air makes strong storms and cyclones
Air when leaves, you're dead

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 05 August 2020

A very perceptive haiku sir! Appreciated and admired...........................10/10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2020

A well penned haiku. Truly amazing....10+++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2020

Brilliant haiku. The meat of this poem is in the third line. So true. Air is gentle and harsh. Yet, without it, we also cease to exist. Cleverly written. To my Poem List.

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Thank you very much RMJ. Air has so many faces, sometimes harsh and sometimes soft. Our life is definitely depending on it

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Anjandev Roy 16 August 2020

Air when leaves, you're dead..........significant......thank u......anjandev roy.

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Thank you Anjandev. When the air leaves us we are no more

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Valsa George 11 August 2020

Yes, air is gentle and wild. It comes to us in the form of a soft breeze, sometimes as wind or storm and sometimes in the form of a fierce tornado or hurricane! It is at once life giving and life destroying! Great Haiku!

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Thank you very much dear poetess. Air is precious for us. Its omovement depending on its mass and speed becomes dear or dreadful. However when it entirely withdraws from us we fall dead

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 August 2020

Very thought provoking haiku. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much dear AKP for the comments on Air

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