Friday, January 14, 2022

Haiku 4 - Freedom Comments

Rating: 5.0

freedom breezes in
when you throw out the evil
trapped in your own thoughts
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
COMMENTS
Rajnish Manga 20 January 2022

That's so cute and meaningful. It calls for introspection and correction at our end before we point fingers at others. Thanks, Geeta Ma'am.

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Kevin Patrick 18 January 2022

So much thought and wisdom in just three simple lines. Fantastic!

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Kevin Patrick 18 January 2022

The ultimate freed! Liberated from the internal fears and doubts that confine us

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 16 January 2022

Freedom matters a lot. Freedom signifies the beauty of inner core. Freedom strengthen life and takes towards victory. This is definitely very valuable poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 15 January 2022

The free air moves if it finds a room with open windows...

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Sandra Feldman 15 January 2022

Best thoughts ever for enlightened behavior. your kindness, goodness and wisdom, shine thru in this lovely Haiku.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2022

Evil thoughts caged in our mind deter us to enjoy the wonders of existence..A poem of great impact. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2022

A powerful and insightful poem in just three brilliant lines. So very true.

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Susan Williams 15 January 2022

That is 5 star true, my dear friend

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 15 January 2022

Fantastic Senryu. Yes of course we keep our selves trapped in our own thoughts.5***

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David Wood 14 January 2022

Lovely Haiku Geeta. Meditation helps too.

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Gary Neazor 14 January 2022

Wonderful poetry.

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