Haiku 4 -Drinking Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 4 -Drinking

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Drinking make you forget you
Drinking make you forfeit you
Drinking make you forlorn you

Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drinking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In the last two haiku I was attracting the drinking people to tell them not to drink
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 21 April 2019

Absolute truth! A drunkard invites great dangers upon himself.... until he becomes a forlorn wreck! A great Haiku!

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Thank you dear friend, drinking makes man a beast

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 December 2018

YEs your poem will induce people to get away from the drinking habit...........thank u dear Parameswaran Nair. thank u again. tony

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Thank you Tony. Let drinkers be inspired and stop the habit

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Devi Krishnakumar 16 November 2018

A good haiku which shows that alcohol is a dangerous evil.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2018

Drinking make you forget you Drinking make you forfeit you Drinking make you forlorn you.....so touching and true. Alcohol must be restricted. Beautiful poem in concise. Thanks for sharing.10

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Thank you Kumaramaniji. Thank you for the encouragement

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Dave Walker 06 November 2018

Alcohol is the root of all evil. Great haiku.

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Thank you Dave Walker. Thank you for the comment

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