Drinking make you forget you
Drinking make you forfeit you
Drinking make you forlorn you
YEs your poem will induce people to get away from the drinking habit...........thank u dear Parameswaran Nair. thank u again. tony
Thank you Tony. Let drinkers be inspired and stop the habit
A good haiku which shows that alcohol is a dangerous evil.
Drinking make you forget you Drinking make you forfeit you Drinking make you forlorn you.....so touching and true. Alcohol must be restricted. Beautiful poem in concise. Thanks for sharing.10
Thank you Kumaramaniji. Thank you for the encouragement
Thank you Dave Walker. Thank you for the comment
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Absolute truth! A drunkard invites great dangers upon himself.... until he becomes a forlorn wreck! A great Haiku!
Thank you dear friend, drinking makes man a beast