Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Haiku 4 (Crocuses Revised And Original) Comments

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Haiku 4 Revised

feisty crocuses
brutal frost scares not these
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Savita Tyagi
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Valsa George 02 March 2016

Let the crocuses bloom in February and delight our eyes! The March frost may or may not be there! Great Haiku..... but the middle line has exceeded the syllable count of seven!

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Savita Tyagi 03 March 2016

Thanks Valsa. I was going to put Feb. to make right count but I guess missed it while posting.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 March 2016

Those crocuses are bold. They must show up when it is time.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 March 2016

And to respect nature; with the love of your heart. Thanks for sharing.

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