Monday, May 29, 2006

Haiku Comments

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Long hazy day`s dreams
angel`s love resides within
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Kathup Tsering
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***** ********* 29 May 2006

A very touching haiku Kathup, if you want to stick to the 17 sylables try desireous. Just a thought. Welcome to Poemhunter. I would advice not posting quite so many at one time, otherwise you will rattle the cages of the locals, it is difficult to crit or choose, where there are so many. Power to your pen. Tai

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Kathup Tsering

Kathup Tsering

Northern estern Tibet
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