Haiku 39 - The Mighty Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 39 - The Mighty

Rating: 5.0


Water fumes form clouds
Clouds proud of thundering might
Kneel before mountains

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Might is not everlasting, to be proud of it is vain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 01 August 2020

Beautiful Haiku, whose truth we can experience right now at the monsoon time.

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Thank you very much dear Sir for your comments that made me really happy. What we see today is embarassing, the newly arising powerful beings when think of themselves to be the most powerful someone with more and real power appears

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2020

Brilliant haiku imbued with wisdom and insight. Great imagery and brevity.

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Thank you very much RMJ. It's widely seen a defect with the people to become arroganrt on their wealth and power, but before the genuine power they have to kneel down.

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Anjandev Roy 26 July 2020

This is an excellent haiku.....thank u, dear poet.......anjandev roy.

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Thank you very much dear poet Anjandev.The so called powerful thinks that he is the most powerfyl being ignorant of real power.

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Michael Walkerjohn 21 July 2020

Aloha Parameswaran and Cheers! Caught the mood and motive of the work from your notes... as much as an individual may rise, there are much higher things all around US that prove our true stature and even these are not forever... All of the best from this life, to you, and to all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Thank you very much dear Michael. As far as I am concerned arrogance is quite intollerable. I believe in God and destiny. The more we grow arrogant the more God will concentrate to curb it down

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A deep, meaningful and inspiring write.10+++

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Thank you very much dear poet for the comments One who is arrogant of his power will have to surrender before a more powerful.

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