Sunday, March 20, 2016

Haiku - 37 Above Worries Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 14 July 2020

From height you do not see others and you are free from worries. Great.

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2017

i like this much better than the first haiku i read today. i also like birds....a lot. both poems seems to follow what i think of as the general rule: 5-7-5. and deal with nature. i tend to take the poem literally. there is a bird high in the sky. no shadow is noticeable below. i don't need to try to philosophize about it to enjoy it; in fact i'd rather not philosophize! bri :)

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2018

Thanks Much Bri, I am happy that u liked it choice is yours how you wish to interpret....

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2016

when you are powerful and rich downtrodden and poor you cannot reach thanks Asim

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2018

Thanks much Loke.....

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Mihaela Pirjol 24 March 2016

This haiku feels like somehow is completing the previous poem I just read...the analogy between the bird and the human-soul...

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

Thank u so much MP.......)))

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 March 2016

With no shadow on earth. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2018

Thanks Bro

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Aarzoo Mehek 21 March 2016

Bliss! wish I could fly this high and vanish from this treacherous world. And for me high is in the terms of spirituality. beautiful Haiku Asim.10++++ for giving me the direction to fly all above the worries.

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

Thanks Aarzoo))))

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Kelly Kurt 20 March 2016

From too high, the shadow is dispersed much too wide to be of consequence

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Valsa George 20 March 2016

Like the bird when we are too high, much above the rest, we can't even cast a shadow! One has to be within reachable distance. A beautiful lesson through a beautiful haiku!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2016

Alone bird flies in lone very high in up above the sky. Very wonderful imagery is drawn in this haiku and this expresses wise humor. Fantastic sharing...10

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

Thanks Much Kumarmaniji)))))

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