Sunday, August 30, 2009

*haiku #34 Comments

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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Ray Schreiber 18 October 2009

This sweltering thumbnail is so good...it gets better with every re-read. It gives me chills.

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Susan Jarvis 13 September 2009

I can feel the beat of the heat in this wonderful haiku, and I simply adore the sound of acres/pickers/break. S :)

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Sandra Fowler 11 September 2009

Very poignant.You say little to say much. Best regards, Sandra

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