Sunday, December 13, 2015

Haiku - 31 Alert Owl Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Israfil Sahibdeen 21 July 2018

Sorry, I meant the words the owl

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Israfil Sahibdeen 21 July 2018

In your haiku poem above, line 2, remove the word owl I think it will give a wider meaning, or a general impression. Any awy I like the poem. I am a poet of 2 books, and presently I am compling a book of Haiku. Copies of my books available on Amazon.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Very amazing haiku shared definitely. Fantastic sharing.10

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Loke Kok Yee 14 December 2015

the owl is very pleased with your haiku beautiful description and well phrased Thanks Asim

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Kelly Kurt 13 December 2015

Great haiku! Perfectly composed

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T Rajan Evol 13 December 2015

Awesome Haiku......10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 December 2015

Fantastic observation and inference. Enjoyed the haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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