Sunday, July 5, 2009

*haiku #30 Comments

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Lillian Susan Thomas
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george george 25 September 2009

Pungent and perfect!

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Ben Gieske 27 July 2009

Quite artful. Each sentence reads by itself, yet your expertly have them relate to each other.

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Susan Jarvis 05 July 2009

A fresh and luscious haiku - I can taste that mint and smell those pines - delicious! S :)

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