Sunday, January 9, 2022

Haiku 3 - Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

dream to fly higher
only with strong wings or else
you may tumble down
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 January 2022

Every bird has dream to fly higher. You have nicely presented this haiku poem. Thank you very much for sharing. May God bring unlimited happiness for you.

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Yes, aim higher, fly higher and reach the heights

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Indira Renganathan 12 January 2022

A timely needed advice....full score

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2022

An insight haiku, focused and factual. A brilliant work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched, Madam... adam.

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KAVIN CHARALAN 11 January 2022

YES TRUE --WITH STRONG WINGS OF HOPE ---POSSIBLE

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 January 2022

Beautiful. One has to know one's strengths and weaknesses when moving forward. Top score

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Anjandev Roy 10 January 2022

Absolutely true.....

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Nabakishore Dash. 10 January 2022

Excellent Haiku Menon Mam.

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Sandra Feldman 10 January 2022

Yes, wings make hearts fly up high, always looking for better skies. A beautiful, encouraging poem, brings on a warm smile. Lovely!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2022

It's an excellent haiku dear madam. I admired the perception of strong wings....top score!

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David Wood 09 January 2022

So true!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 January 2022

Very wise words to live by, Doc

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