Haiku 3 Comments

this poem made me feel sad as if there is some underlying meaning to fast fading summer. A true poet Sean who can evoke these feelings in readers with just a few words. Can't wait for your next.

This is quite lovely just as it is, yet I feel there is so much more bubbling under the surface - potential to extend this into a longer poem me thinks? ; -)

This is quite lovely just as it is but I can feel all kind of things bubbling under the surface - potential for a longer poem me thinks? ; -)