Haiku-3 Comments

Lovely haiku

Clouds, frogs, wind. all fine images from nature....... you are united with the nature dear Bharati, thank u. tony

A fabulous Haiku.. enjoyed..10

I felt and heard it all, frogs croaking love calls. Thanks Bharati.

ah! the promise of rain. glen

The harbinger of rain. Short, lovely, and insightful. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful write on rains painted portrayed different voices and feelings. Loved it.

Sounds of nature! ! Thanks for sharing.

Oh! That is a wonderfully crafted line- - Clouds thunder above- - You present an image simultaneously for both the eyes and the ears. Very nicely done.

about kigo: - frogs represent a kigo for spring - Clouds/wind can express a kigo, too (the rainy season) .

you've asked for my point of view.. well, the 5-7-5 pattern is respected and the images are clear ones, dear Bharati, but you should close your haiku expressing a subtle wonder before the event/object of the experience.

A vivid pen-picture of rainy season.

The intimation of rain welcomed by frogs, aptly expressed in your magnetic haiku........

Nicely done.Thanks for sharing.