Monday, June 10, 2013

Haiku(3) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Celestial hues
feathers basked in love's blush
pensively perched
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Yasmin Khan
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

Here you painted the happiness nice

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

a nice haiku. well written enjoyed

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Paul Brookes 13 June 2013

Well written Haiku in its purest form Beautiful 10/10 BB

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Farah Ilyas 11 June 2013

Strong visualization of nature in such haiku...great

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David Wood 11 June 2013

A delightful Haiku, I do love to read poems about nature.

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Wahab Abdul 10 June 2013

aha! it came out nicely, bravo.

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Yasmin Khan

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