Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Haiku - 27 Hide And Seek Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2016

With the joy of nature in the name of the games. Nice work.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Great imagery, a playful action.

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Valsa George 11 November 2015

Beautiful haiku! The transition of day to night is beautifully expressed!

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Sanjukta Nag 10 November 2015

sun sets darkness grips Awesome poetic expression sir. Loved it.100

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

now it is only hide and no seek thanks Asim-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2015

Playing of hide and seek by golden rays of sun is very amazing definitely. Interesting poem shared here.

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Shakil Ahmed 10 November 2015

beautiful poem with great thought, thanks for sharing.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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