Monday, February 3, 2020

Haiku 25 - Night And Light Comments

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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2022

A sweet three-liner. Loved it

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Valsa George 22 March 2020

We all wait for the arrival of light! Night is meant only for rest! Once we get enough rest, light is preferred to darkness. Light symbolizes all that is good and virtuous! A beautiful haiku with the right no of syllables!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2020

Day and night! ! Always waiting for the light. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you Edward. All who wish to avoid darkness are tired waiting for the light

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2020

Everything has its own time. Patience is one of the great virtues. A lovely haiku with compelling imagery.

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The impatience for seeing the day break after the long boring night is stressed

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Savita Tyagi 06 February 2020

Lovely Haiku. Nature's imagery is endless in its beauty and symbolism.

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Thank you very much Savitaji.As the nightingale sings to pass the night and the stars go drowsy the day breaks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2020

Stars are drowsy too....beautiful! A wonderful haiku sir....loved it.....10++++

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Darkness causes a sort of lethargy however beautiful and entertaining it is. Thank you Dillip

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