Haiku 23 Comments

I like it for a while and I can get into it

A meaning ful write, DAVID!

the red kite sets the vision to search for the rodents, don't get deceived by its soaring high...it will dive and dodge any moment! ! !

A great poem, in the field next to where I live you can see the Sparrowhawks going for the field mice.

Very nice - you fly a kite and kite flies. Thank you.

a good haiku. thoughtful

dual meaning. i love this one. checkout my poem ''jojo my brother. i hope you will like it.

that's excellent duality, great write