Haiku 22 - Pride Goes B'fore A Fall Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 22 - Pride Goes B'fore A Fall

Rating: 5.0


Hills stand high with pride
Make slide down by heavy rain.
Pride goes b'fore a fall.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's just before the fall we feel unreasonably proud of us
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 September 2019

Such a brilliant haiku, sir Parameswaran...10+++

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Thank you very much Bernard. Comments like yours really hail me to heights

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Bri Edwards 31 August 2019

if not " before" it probably goes AFTER! ! bri :)

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You are absolutely correct Bri. A fall is definite either before or after. Thank you very much

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2019

An excellent three liner sir! Loved reading it.....10

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Thank you Dillip for the comments and rating. Hope you won't overlook my poems for want of time in your busy schedule

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Spock The Vegan 29 August 2019

Good haiku and analogy. Thanks

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Thank you very much dear poet Spock The Vegan. Please continue to encourage me with such valuable comments

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