Haiku- 20 The Moon (Ritu Didi) Poem by Prabir Gayen

Haiku- 20 The Moon (Ritu Didi)

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Haiku-20
-The Moon-
(Ritu Didi)
(Reverence)


Thy look betokens deep,
Shore beyond this shore and dazes,
Waves vanish into peep.

The Moon in lone shrine,
Into thy eyes doth cleave way,
Knowledge deep rests of life and death.

Thou art smile and light,
Master's grace is thy delight,
Illusive is the tongue.

Opaque glance doth stir deep,
The subtle Delphic utterances,
Smile is prime pristine.

In thy abysmal soul,
Knowledge eternal doth deeply flow,
The flame of fairy vowel.

Life beyond life, trance,
Do thou stir in novice self.
Meek heart to thy worth.

Haiku- 20 The Moon (Ritu Didi)
Thursday, November 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 November 2018

a very beautiful didi wow you her lovely vow this is a SUNKU LATEST LIKE HAIKU 2 -3 and 4 words per successive line do try on didi's beauty

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Prabir Gayen 30 November 2018

Didi is a silent divine teacher, preacher and worker. She works for social change.. A divine soul of art of living.She teaches the basic simple rule of living life properly.. She can inspire thousands of Haiku..... She is difinitely a chosen one of the Master....... As for her beauty it indescribable... Thanks for your comments and support dear poet poet

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Sreelakshmi 30 November 2018

The choice of words pulled me deep into the poem. After reading it, I feel a serene feeling.

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Prabir Gayen 30 November 2018

.....Didi is a silent divine teacher, preacher and worker. She works for social change.. A divine soul of art of living.She teaches the basic simple rule of living life properly.. She can inspire thousands of Haiku..... She is difinitely a chosen one of the Master....... As for her beauty it indescribable... Thanks for your comments and support dear poet poet......

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Prabir Gayen 30 November 2018

.....Didi is a silent divine teacher, preacher and worker. She works for social change.. A divine soul of art of living.She teaches the basic simple rule of living life properly.. She can inspire thousands of Haiku..... She is difinitely a chosen one of the Master....... As for her beauty it indescribable... Thanks for your comments and support dear poet poet

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 November 2018

time wasted sorry my sunkus didn't u reach

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 November 2018

time wasted sorry my sunkus didn't u reach

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