Saturday, January 8, 2022

Haiku 2 - Colours Comments

Rating: 5.0

the black thunder bangs
while the red kite whistles off
gloomy blue ambush
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 12 January 2022

Great Imagery madam. Wonderful poem.

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Indira Renganathan 12 January 2022

A poet's passionate observation in this intense write....A Very Happy New Year Geeta

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Beautiful! The horror of an imminent storm expressed in so few words.nice. Top score

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Sandra Feldman 08 January 2022

Announcing a storm.How nicely and vividly written! the colorful tone, mitigates the fear. Great job, dear Geeta.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 January 2022

yes Geeta Wonderful haiku

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David Wood 08 January 2022

Lovely Haiku Geeta. I love red kites.

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David Wood 08 January 2022

Loveky

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