Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Haiku-2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Haiku-2

Vast sea of emotions
Rolling down my cheeks
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Aarzoo Mehek
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2021

A poignant and powerful haiku loaded with tons of emotions...top score

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Excellent haiku. Attracts top score

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Varsha M 22 September 2020

Tears matters a lot not for what they are but they way they flow carrying away the load. Beautifully penned. Thank-you ma'am.

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Juhaina Tumlu 22 September 2020

Vast sea of emotions Rolling down your cheeks can unplugged your feelings heart to heart communication happens.5*

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L MILTON HANKINS 22 September 2020

Very readable syllabic verse that models Haiku in an interesting way. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2020

Thanks for the amazing graphic which more than complements the poem.

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2020

Excellent expression made out in this three-liner exhibiting infinite power of our emotions.... in a unique way. Thanks Ma'am.

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