Sunday, October 11, 2015

Haiku 2 Comments

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Souren Mondal
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fatemeh zolfagharian 29 July 2022

There is a deep silence in these words, even though it is a rebellion.

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Valsa George 28 January 2016

In a stagnant pond, there will be no fish, no live forms! There are no ripples of movement..... It is in a state of utter sterility. The king fisher flying over a stagnant pond will never have the fortune of sighting a fish. This utter vacuity is powerfully projected by three symbols in three lines..... a stagnant pond, a kingfisher flying over it and a heart stolen. Great Haiku!

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Richard Thézé 30 November 2015

I like this Haiku very much. I, too, like to see how much meaning can be conveyed in only a few words.

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Souren Mondal 30 November 2015

Thank you very much for reading and commenting..

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