Haiku(2) Comments

excellent haiku. thess are some of my favorite forms. well done

have you counted the third line? '' thirsty ' has 2 syllables.....but the meaning of the 3rd line is terrific.. love it...excellent! ! 1cracking!

Farah ilyas is right, it's deep! ! !

Desiccated boughs want water to flourish but fail to do so, same in our life happens, nothing could lessen our burden, our miseries....multi_interpretable Haiku... digging in it still...fabulous

Wonderful.............

Simply nice to think and imagine_Soul