Haiku - 2 Comments

Sir, This is the most profound of any Haikus i have ever read.It is so moving. The sunflower who is fascinated by the sun always admires him...yet it is the poor man who has to sweat it out....whether sun or not, he has to make his ends meet.he has no time for such fascinations. His question is but natural..

Simple and sweet...I like C.P.Sharma's comment too...and thanks for your comments Sathya...Ritual Ram is about slaughtering goat in the name of God in rituals...on vow for fulfilled wishes

Come closer, warm the hearts soul, make the minds eye light, To the truth of all. Haiku 2 helped me to create my own. You are a wonderful poet Sathya.

very intriguing obsessions do we notice in nature...feels good reading it!

What is there in flame The moth dances around And disappears CP

Lovely one sir...and i too sweat sometimes even in very cold places...10+++ regards shan

haha...oh, sun..your answer we want to hear... I think it's in Samanyan's poems(The mother or The sun's plea) ...(smile.) . the thoughts here are amusing yet true..in other way... i love this...very nice haiku... 10+++ l♥ vel♥ ts, maia

haha! ! u are so right.......

You definitely have a flair for haiku...10

Wonderful 10+++

we could'nt spend a day without the sun..may be the sunflower get's it's full nourishment...a perfect haiku