Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Haiku -2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Black birds on a tree
Singing melodiously
‘Tis good to be free
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Sandra Martyres
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Sue Sie 01 June 2009

The two go together well..Birds and flowers...on natures path..10+ Sue

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I could feel nature throughout all these Haikus. The clouds, the birds and the roses. Very well executed Sandra. 10 Karin Anderson

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Mamta Agarwal 30 May 2009

Very beautiful imagery, lifts the spirits and makes my room fragrant. 10 Mamta

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Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

and I got a whiff of your roses (haikus) in bloom lovely write a tenner from meeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

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Meggie Gultiano 29 May 2009

very nice Haiku, Sandra. Just learning Haiku, inspired by Ben Gieski's works.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

I am delighted from the fragrance of these lovely flowers. My 10 with joy.

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Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009

Lovely work-black birds, ducks, and roses. Some of my favorite things 10 without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Subroto Chatterjee 26 May 2009

Very enjoyable Nature...Well penned...{I'd love the ducks to 'arrive' instead of survive! ! ] Three cheers, Sandra. Cheers. Subroto

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Naidz Ladia 26 May 2009

this is a nice work, , picture of nature is presented..naizz

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Joseph Poewhit 26 May 2009

Them ducks love rain.

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