Friday, May 29, 2009

Haiku #19 Comments

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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Ben Gieske 12 June 2009

Lillian, I think this would turn out better if you dropp some of the words: bats swarm where pigeons roost where's traffic control? Ben

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Very cute and interesting 10+

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