Thursday, July 21, 2011

Haiku 17 Comments

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garden herb
bent by the wind
and remains so
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Len Webster 21 July 2011

Interesting experiments - I'm always unsure how well the haiku fits with English structures but you have done a good job here. It's also refreshing to see another language alongside the English version. Keep experimenting! These make good reading and open up new horizons for us!

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