Monday, February 18, 2019

Haiku 155 (Thy Smile) Comments

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Haiku 155
(Thy Love)
Time Immemorial,
Thou reigned as the deepest pain,
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Prabir Gayen
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Kim Barney 18 February 2019

Last line is the icing on the cake. Very nice.

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Thomas Kane 18 February 2019

Very nice! leaves you drawing many meanings or possibilities of meanings, which makes for fantastic poem. I'm not going to lie this poem had me checking the meaning of a few words. You have a deep understanding of the English language that exceeds mine for sure.

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Prabir Gayen 18 February 2019

Very thanks dear poet...and hearty welcome to my page...

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Srijita Mondal 18 February 2019

Time Immemorial, Thou reigned as the deepest pain, Thy Smile effaces soul. 🏵️🏵️🏵️🏵️🏵️🏵️🏵️🏵️

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opoet me poet 18 February 2019

very beautifully created but meanings are so many lovely art let poets draw own conclusions what else are poets for? PG Ji create more than many your vocab is indelibly SIGNIFICANT let all know ye PG

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Rajnish Manga 18 February 2019

Quite a mystical expression- Thou reigned as the deepest pain Thy Smile effaces soul..... Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 February 2019

Lovely haiku, Prabir.....10++++++

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Gajanan Mishra 18 February 2019

Thy smile, great write, good one

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