Haiku 15 - The Jackal And The Crane Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 15 - The Jackal And The Crane

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Jackal wants crane's help
"Pick fish bone stuck in my throat,
Leave you safe - my help"

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2021

A wonderful haiku sir..loved the concept.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 April 2019

Crane picking fish from the throat. the old story in a new form you have presented. so precise and with love. thank u dear Parmeswaran. thank u again. tony

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Thank you Tony. It's a humble attempt to present the old wine in the new bottle. Thanks a lot dear friend

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Fine haiku dear poet ❤

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Thank you very much PG for the fine comments

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Gajanan Mishra 11 February 2019

Jackal so clever, good write anyway

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Thank you Gajananji very much for the kind comment. I like your poems very much. I will read and comment as time allows. Thank you

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