Saturday, February 16, 2019

Haiku 146 (Emptiness) Comments

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Haiku 146
(emptiness)
Years pass as air blows,
The tree of life is empty,
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Prabir Gayen
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Luz Hanaii 02 March 2019

Sounds like something an old man would say, especially the part; It sounds nothing more. because many older people lose their hearing. It's so sad but we must accept life as we age.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 February 2019

stand still the tree is no chaotic no riot its shadow is peace

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

Years pass as air blows, The tree of life is empty, It sounds nothing more.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2019

r u becoming a bamboo flute now PG LOVELY

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2019

The tree of life is empty........ you tend very much towards hindu spiritual philosophy. give us the gems of this spirituality through your great poems dear Prabir. Tony

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

Years pass as air blows, The tree of life is empty, It sounds nothing more......

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

Years pass as air blows, The tree of life is empty, It sounds nothing more

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