Haiku - 146 Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

Haiku - 146

Rating: 4.8


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it has bushy tail.

little agile red squirrel.

it is on the nut.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Schreiber 25 October 2009

I like this. It seems like a linear portrait. seen, one thing a time. First, the obvious, attention getting tail, followed by the recognition of the animal, finally the action in which it's involved. Interesting form, solid no nonsense.

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