Haiku 145-(Life) Poem by Prabir Gayen

Haiku 145-(Life)

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Haiku 145
(Life)
A leaf saved from tree,
Waving here and there with air,
Floats having no choice.
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Haiku 145-(Life)
Friday, February 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 15 February 2019

So.in essense you are saying life is like a leaf in the wind.. nothing more cannot say that I agree with the premise but it IS thought-provoking... thank you

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Meethi Mondal 17 February 2019

A leaf saved from tree, Waving here and there with air, Floats having no choice.

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Meethi Mondal 16 February 2019

Good................

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Christina Chin 16 February 2019

Beautifully crafted.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 February 2019

A poignant and thought provoking write. A life devoid of choice is having no life at all. There is no freedom which is the foundation of life. Well penned.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

Life becomes life when it becomes choice less...having no choice... Like the dead leaf...a leaf that is severed form tree has no choice...it moves or Floss freely at the sweet will of air....it sways with the mood of air..That life is beau...that life is conditioning..

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

Egulo comment e na likhe poet's note -e likhun..story about poem e

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