Haiku 134 (Meditation) Poem by Prabir Gayen

Haiku 134 (Meditation)

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Haiku 134
(Meditation)
My mind feels cheering,
When I find you sing for me,
Beetle broke my trance.
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Thursday, February 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Srijita Mondal 07 February 2019

Beetle breaks our trance, dust closes our eyes..being obsructed by trivial things we can not view our Infinity

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Srijita Mondal 07 February 2019

Beetle broke my trance One of the greatest lines I have ever found, pregnant with deep philosophy

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2019

Two extremes nicely connected with meditation haiku.10

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Srijita Mondal 07 February 2019

My mind feels cheering, When I find you sing for me, Beetle broke my trance.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 February 2019

you sing for me, and my mind dances and cheers.. fine. i smiled with u when i read it. thank u.. tony

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