Thursday, February 7, 2019

Haiku 132(Fall) Comments

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Haiku 132
(Fall)
The wings of my song,
I spread to have soarings high,
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Prabir Gayen
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 February 2019

never fall except at one time and you know it when so keep flying let ur colours fly HIGHER THAN HIGH PG

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Kostas Lagos 07 February 2019

It's delightful to read such a splendid haiku

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Meethi Mondal 07 February 2019

The wings of my song, I spread to have soarings high, Fall like Icarus.

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Srijita Mondal 07 February 2019

Nice poem.nice allusion.. But Icarus fell..you will not fall❤️ The wings of your song will always soar high❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Srijita Mondal 07 February 2019

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 🙄🤔😥😪😯😭🙁😟☹️🙃

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 February 2019

oh Icarus wings Daedalus, the father made it by wax and feather; but unfortunately the warning of father was unheard and the FALLING was so dreadful.......///beautiful

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