Thursday, February 7, 2019

Haiku 130 (Dumb) Comments

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Haiku 130
(Dumb)
Thy song sonorous,
Around my lone heart plunk endless,
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Prabir Gayen
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 February 2019

remove the single snap begin again two as one you will never be dumb

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Meethi Mondal 07 February 2019

Thy song sonorous, Around my lone heart plunk endless, I am abashed, dumb.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2019

A thought provoking poem. Sometimes we are threatened and feel helpless and vulnerable on the strength showed by other people. Well crafted write.

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Srijita Mondal 07 February 2019

Thou art not dumb Thy song sonorous, Around my lone heart plunk endless, I am abashed, dumb.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 February 2019

Thy song feel as sonorous to the DUMB!

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