Wednesday, July 20, 2016

Haiku-120 (In The Country Of Blindness) Comments

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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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M Asim Nehal 25 July 2016

Superb short poem....Nicely thought and conceived. I would like to bring to your kind attention the definition of Haiku: a Japanese poem or verse form, consisting of 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5,7, and 5 syllables, often about nature or a season.

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Tom Billsborough 21 July 2016

It can be dangerous to stand out, but sometimes necessary if we are to cure the blind. This is one of your best Haikus. Tom Billsborough

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