Haiku 12 - Mighty Mouse Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 12 - Mighty Mouse

Rating: 5.0


Mountains stop strong winds
Mouse digs holes through big mountain
Mouse feels mightiest

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Claiming undeserved importance for irrelevant activities
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 20 January 2019

Mouse feels mightest.Nice haiku on ego.

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Thank you Binayakumar for the comments

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2019

digging holes through the great mountain and feeling great. i smiled when i read your poem.. in little verses u convey a lot. thank u very much for your poetic mind dear Parmeswaran.. thank u. tony

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Kingsley Egbukole 30 September 2023

Mouse dare thrive where the mighty wind fail. Small but enterprising mouse

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 September 2023

Yes, it is so! A meaningful haiku. Top score!

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 March 2020

Digging through the mighty mountains and the feeling of might...... lovely philosophy. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2019

Muse of the mouse! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you dear poet. I am glad that you remembered me and commented on my poems

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Devi Krishnakumar 24 January 2019

This Haiku conveys a lot of deeper meanings to one who reads it. Many of us thinks that we have done great things in our life and we boast ourselves to get praise of others but it is actually nothing.

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