Haiku 12 Comments

Found out that Japanese Haiku is 5-7-5- but some poets decided to go against it, and now it's any way you want! But I reckon 5-7-5- is better?

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

10,11,12, heaven's vaults beheld. Three haikus all different yet all say volumes. Good writes 10/10 BB =: OD

it still is a lovely thought. God is always first

You are right Kevin an omission on my part.

Very true! Only complaint David is that Haiku is 17 syllables 5-7-5- or so I was told?

Awesome speech we want more

So so true. Fantastic poem.

Man must realize his role to bring peace. Thoughtful haiku.

good and heart touching, thanks.