Friday, November 8, 2024

💧💦🪷Haiku. Comments

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Dusk dewdrops clinging
on lotuses, unfurls dawn
watery demise
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Rajitha K.S. Ayyappan
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Beautiful haiku. But I have a doubt: the dew drops clinging to the lotus flower at dusk when the flower furls itself in, drops into the water at dawn when the lotus unfurls again, naturally. But does it mean it's demise?

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