Friday, October 8, 2021

Haiku ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

expensive wristwatch
rusted in the seawater
now time is standstill
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kinsley Lee 10 October 2021

Brilliant haiku. Asim. Thanks a lot.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2021

Brillliant haiku,5 Stars full, Mr. Asim Sir!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 October 2021

Top class haiku that deserves top marks!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 October 2021

A wrist watch might be, once in water, time stands still, it dies!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 October 2021

I like this Haiku, Asim ji. The truth retold with such a metaphor. However expensive

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Gordon Walter 08 October 2021

Yes life becomes standstill after death.

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