Haiku 11 - Sun And Moon Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 11 - Sun And Moon

Rating: 5.0


Sun shines during day
Sun and moon can't shine same time
Moon shines during night

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Egos cannot go hand in hand
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Devi Krishnakumar 25 January 2019

A good haiku which says that one cannot claim that he/she is in a higher position than others on behalf of certain things.

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Valsa George 22 January 2019

Sun is the great source of light. That which receives light from the sun cannot claim to be greater than the source! Another profound write!

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True words Valsa George. There are disciples who pretend to be greater than the master. Thank you very much

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 January 2019

Parameswaran, a wonderful haiku...................

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Thank you very much Bernard for your words of appreciation

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2019

An insightful short work! Appreciated the undertone...........10

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Thank you very much Dillip for the instant appreciating comments

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