Nimbus lingered eyes
Night sleeps on a wet pillow
The star gaze gets blurred!
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Emotionally touching! Just in few lines the weight of a bitter heart is reflected in magnificent way!
In every sense a powerful haiku that speaks louder than a long poem about the melancholy lying frozen in the heart! Great job!
Superb one. 5-7-5 now Nimbus lingered eyes Night sleeps on a wet pillow The star gaze, blurred! ! !