Haiku Comments

Drifting slowly into another realm! Nice work.

Like all good haiku yours is a single breath, in and out, and then poof! it's gone. This one really caught my attention, and I re-read it several times and each time it conveyed more of the mystery of things. Did you intend that? It doesn't really matter in a haiku. Two people look at a flower and smile at each other and walk away in a pleasant silence. What they're thinking isn't as important as that moment of common delight. That's what your haiku gives your readers. But that image THE CEILING OF FAIRY DREAM lingers in my thoughts.

Beautiful haiku, embodies the feelings of softness, lightness and serenity, as in a dream.

short and to the point.loved it.