Haiku Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Haiku

Rating: 4.5


violet feathers sweep
the ceiling of fairy dream
drifting slow westward

Haiku
Tuesday, April 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 August 2016

Drifting slowly into another realm! Nice work.

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Cigeng Zhang 04 August 2016

Thank you for your nice comment!

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Daniel Brick 09 April 2016

Like all good haiku yours is a single breath, in and out, and then poof! it's gone. This one really caught my attention, and I re-read it several times and each time it conveyed more of the mystery of things. Did you intend that? It doesn't really matter in a haiku. Two people look at a flower and smile at each other and walk away in a pleasant silence. What they're thinking isn't as important as that moment of common delight. That's what your haiku gives your readers. But that image THE CEILING OF FAIRY DREAM lingers in my thoughts.

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Cigeng Zhang 10 April 2016

Your comment is very vivid. If my small Haiku brings you more spaces for imagination, I will feel contented. Thank you for your beautiful comment as usual!

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Kwai Chee Low 29 July 2015

Beautiful haiku, embodies the feelings of softness, lightness and serenity, as in a dream.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 May 2015

short and to the point.loved it.

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