Monday, January 21, 2019

Haiku 100-(Sleep) Comments

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Haiku 100
(Sleep)
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Sleep falls on eyelids,
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Prabir Gayen
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Rudra Mondal 29 May 2020

Sleep falls on eyelids, Body still and hibernated, Mind is lost in sea

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 January 2019

A wonderful image captured in a brief poem. Thanks for writing and sharing too.

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Meethi Mondal 22 January 2019

A fine Haiku poet................

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 January 2019

raat bhar neendh nahee ayee tera rah dekhtey dekhtey koi comment bhee naheen ayeee waqt koe guzartey guzartey dekhtey dekhtey PG BHAI ji

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Prabir Gayen 22 January 2019

Your poem will get more comment...my student will comment with me...your poem is in Facebook Dear poet...

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2019

Superb Haiku. Sleep is for body mind remains unrest.

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