Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Haiku 10,11 (Tornado) Comments

Rating: 5.0

tornado spirals
rain dance exhilarating
far out death drum beats
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Savita Tyagi
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Udaya R. Tennakoon 11 May 2016

Cty of the dog gives a internal deep sense to picture that the moment you describe.. very good write dear Savita..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 May 2016

Beautifully envisioned haiku displaying an amazing flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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