Thursday, January 17, 2019

Haiku -1 Comments

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Rain clouds...

Darken rainy clouds,
running hastily as if;
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Devanshu Patel
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Aniruddha Pathak 21 July 2019

Yes, it rises up, rids all the salty taste, and then falls from heaven to quench someone's thirst. Lovely.

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Pallab Chaudhury 21 January 2019

A nice one... depicting how one acts when he is responsible... Thank you for sharing with us. Stay blessed, PC

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2019

Excellent haiku. liked it.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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