Haiku # 1 Comments
Worth living is life
when the night flower bloom
moon is hidden within
the breast of cloud
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Dont hide dont hide moon, let out to be clear in the zone of night chest! _Soul
Interesting composition. But the format is NOT that of haiku! Haiku has three lines, usually with a 5-7-5 syllable scheme. Haiku is the most difficult format of poetry to master (I myself am not good at haiku) . Haiku is a form of meditation, which requires years of practice for perfection. Each of the three lines should evoke a distinct image connected through a very subtle thread.... With devotion and practice, the above poem can be converted to a nice haiku. Good effort.
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8/4/2025 8:36:58 AM # 1.0.0
moon must shine to brighten the soul of the living!