Droplet fall
Tear or rain
Both are causes
Of pain …..
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Tear is compared with rain and this comparison values more as per natural perception. This poem is excellently penned.10
Droplet fall Tear or rain Both are causes Of pain ….. Beautiful haiku shared. Thanks for sharing.
Without someone it's all pain, only pain....................................................
Quiet powerful Haiku...Loved its depth...I love to read poems on tears, rain pain.
5/7 /5 is the syllable count in a Haiku....the thought is very powerful...like it much
Falling the drop yeah; cause of pain on the heart top!