Saturday, April 20, 2013

Haiku # 1 Comments

Rating: 4.3

Droplet fall
Tear or rain
Both are causes
Of pain …..
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Ruby Mostazir
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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

Falling the drop yeah; cause of pain on the heart top!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

Tear is compared with rain and this comparison values more as per natural perception. This poem is excellently penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 22 December 2018

Excellent short poem...10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 October 2018

Tears and raindrops...... fine theme dear poet. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2017

Droplet fall Tear or rain Both are causes Of pain ….. Beautiful haiku shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 August 2015

Without someone it's all pain, only pain....................................................

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Ruby Mostazir 01 July 2014

i must say, nice taste you have @Geetha Jayakumar thanks!

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Quiet powerful Haiku...Loved its depth...I love to read poems on tears, rain pain.

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Muhammad Ali 01 January 2014

very simple, touchy and powerful lines.

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Heather Wilkins 18 September 2013

yes the syllable is as Wahab has stated good thought

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Heather Wilkins 18 September 2013

yes the syllable is as Wahab has stated good thought

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Wahab Abdul 01 May 2013

5/7 /5 is the syllable count in a Haiku....the thought is very powerful...like it much

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 April 2013

oh so deep cant be spelt

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